Wednesday, 23 September 2015

Draft 2 great reader e-response

Lburch (2015) alleged in "Pharmaceutical Disposal" that legislation can help to prevent contamination of water sources by "common” pharmaceutical disposal which causes health problems to lives. Lburch claims Flushing of medications is common. Drugs are detected in the water resources. Studies support his idea by detecting drugs in 80% of water sources. Lburch notes water treatment plants cannot filter out the medications. These medications affect aquatic life, especially the amphibians. He mentions studies showing spawning problem and drop of fertility caused by the meditations. Lburch believes, to prevent such contaminations, safe and convenient medication disposal is the key. Laws, such as Secure and Responsible Drug Disposal Act, were passed and ways are provided and promoted dispose the drugs safely. However, the causes he listed for the problem is not adequately comprehensive. Furthermore, part of his claim lacks direct evidence to support the reliability.


Lbruch’s argument is not comprehensive when he talks about the ways to solve the contamination of pharmaceuticals in water. Not to flush the pharmaceuticals into the toilet and legislation are the possible ways. However, Lbruch does not discuss about the root cause of the problem. Pharmaceuticals may not be used because people purchase them in large amounts unnecessarily. Just talk about flushing here or providing ways for safe disposal are not enough for this situation. Sealing the bags containing pharmaceutical wastes as suggested by Harvard University (2015) also suggests that the bags that are not sealed may cause the same contamination problem even if the pharmaceuticals are not disposed into the water. Furthermore, pharmaceuticals, for external application or in skincare products and perfumes (Harvard University, 2015) , may be used, but they are secreted through human skins or with human waste into the water, too (D. Fallik, 2013). In these situations, not to flush the pharmaceuticals into the toilet or legislation is not practical. Therefore, the lack of analysis of the root causes in such contamination problem fails to give the readers a complete picture of the problem. This makes the argument misleading.

In addition, the data used to show the negative consequences of the pharmaceutical contaminations to the aquatic life is not convincing enough. As suggested by L. Eisenstadt (2005), the abnormality of the aquatic life can be affected by “weather changes, other chemicals present in the water, temperature fluctuations, and a host of other variables”, in an environment without high control. Thus, without data that can show the direct relationship between pharmaceutical contamination and aquatic life, it renders the impact of how people react to the consequence of the contaminations.

Summarily, despite using data to build the link on how pharmaceutical contaminations is caused and causes other problems, the author should show a more comprehensive analysis to show the root causes of the pharmaceutical contaminations and try to show data demonstrating a more proportional and convincing relationship between the contaminations and the environment. However, no matter pharmaceutical disposal practice is a way for such water contaminations, the contaminations in the water sources are a truly existing and proven problem for people to worry about.

References

Lburch (2015, March 4). PHARMACEUTICAL DISPOSAL

 Retrieved from http://www.citizenscampaign.org/campaigns/pharmaceutical-disposal.asp

Harvard University (2015). Drugs in the water

 

Lburch (2015, March 4). PHARMACEUTICAL DISPOSAL
 Retrieved from http://www.citizenscampaign.org/campaigns/pharmaceutical-disposal.asp

D. Fallik (2013). This New Study Found More Drugs in Our Drinking Water Than Anybody Knew And no one's doing anything about it Retrieved from http://www.newrepublic.com/article/115883/drugs-drinking-water-new-epa-study-finds-more-we-knew

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